Madame-origami's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Team Flapjack 2]

pffft

That's just pure awesome

[Compassion]

Very cool

Love the colors and movement of this piece. Wish the lines on the hair had been smoother though.
Cool idea overall.

[Lumines]

Nomnomnom~

Saw you make this irl. Still love it. Feathers look a little fake compared with the rest of the body, but it still looks good.

[Potato?]

hot.... potato~

Needs a background.

Lmao at the idea though xD

[Woman Bot v2.0]

I can see what you were trying to do with this but

It does need some help in the perspective department.
The line art is very clean and nice however, so you have tremendous possibility.
Just Needs a little tweaking- Her head should be a little bigger, and arms a bit thinner, more tapered.
There's a site on the internet with alot of good perspective references- I can't think of it right now, but it's very helpful.
Keep on the good work, and don't be offended with critique c:

Artyluck responds:

Okay, but I can make normal perspectives and etc. This draw just planned to be exactly as it is. xP Thanks for your cool review anyway. :3

[Don't Move]

Yup, what's going on with the thumb

Gosh darn, fantastic perspective~

Love her corset and disgusted/annoyed expression. Her arm gauntlets are also excellent.

Nothing really to critique except that oddly anorexic thumb. And her chin seems a bit off o.o
Other than that it's great though~

[rose knight]

Ornate and fun~

This costume has a very fun design~
The hot bubble gum pink of her dress clashes a bit with the richer colors of her hair and armor... But still a very intricate design~

halo1luv responds:

Thank you! I did it on purpose(shows her unnecessary approach to being feminine). Although I could have turned it down a notch.